Monday, September 7, 2009

Thesis statement

Although we will never have a clear-cut line between what is crazy and what is not, we believe fear and emotion of being lonely or isolated turns people crazy. Paranoia kicks in, and we become torn from reality into a world of despair and the panic starts to build, because war is an unforgivable and forgettable past.
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  1. SteeveSeptember 14, 2009 at 12:04 AM

    Imogen,

    I think your thesis needs a little more clarity.

    - insanity
    - isolation
    - "war is an unforgivable and forgettable past"

    Could you please write one short sentence stating clearly what your essay will argue?

    Mr. Doubt.

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  2. SteeveOctober 28, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    Imogen,

    Where is your response to the poem?

    Mr. Doubt.

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